Thursday 19th 2022 me and the boys were spending time by the beach playing basketball. We hit those 3ez and got those layups. It was a really nice sunny day but It was really hot after a mean 3 v all match of basketball we chilled for a little bit until Peter said “yo should we go for a swim” rest of us said “yo that's us”.
Once we dipped our feet in the water some of us said “ooh,that’s cold” when we went into the deep it got colder but we didn't care.we seen a big wave and we all tried to take on the wave but NAH we got dumped on, we all went up to the surface but we couldn't see Tyler
HE was in the shallow place all you could see was his Georgewashintin looking hair. Charlie yelled out to Tyler “come by the boys eh! Tyler replied “Nah too deep!” the rest of us said “WUSSY!” Tyler said back “ oh come on don't be like that!!”.
After we went swimming we went to the shops and got us some drinks and pies
Hi Colin...Cool story. It sounds very realistic and descriptive especially the George Washington hair comment! You did well with your speech marks in the right spots. Well done. Keep up the good writing.
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