NARRATIVE WRITING.

Thursday 19th 2022 me and the boys were spending time by the beach playing basketball. We hit those 3ez and got those layups. It was a really nice sunny day but It was really hot after a mean 3 v all match of basketball we chilled for a little bit until Peter said “yo should we go for a swim” rest of us said “yo that's us”.

Once we dipped our feet in the water some of us said “ooh,that’s cold” when we went into the deep it got colder but we didn't care.we seen a big wave and we all tried to take on the wave but NAH we got dumped on, we all went up to the surface but we couldn't see Tyler

HE was in the shallow place all you could see was his Georgewashintin looking hair. Charlie yelled out to Tyler “come by the boys eh! Tyler replied “Nah too deep!” the rest of us said “WUSSY!” Tyler said back “ oh come on don't be like that!!”.

After we went swimming we went to the shops and got us some drinks and pies

25,50,100

 We use the ocean for too many things:

I agree that we use our ocean far too much and don’t look after it.  We cause far too much  litter pollution dumping our rubbish into it, we overfish,  and we use it to pump our household waste and sewage into. 

overfishing, when too many fish are taken out of the ocean it creates an imbalance that can erode the food web and lead to loss of other important marine life,including vulnerable species like sea turtles and coral  MORE INFO NEEDED  

Every year, 8 million metric tons of plastics enter our ocean on top of the estimated 150 million metric tons that currently circulate our marine environments.Plastic debris causes the deaths of more than a million seabirds every year, as well as more than 100,000 marine mammals.

The Signs of Climate Change

• Higher Temperatures.

• More Droughts.

• Wilder Weather.

• Changing Rain and Snow Patterns

production

 On Wednesday it was the school production day.it was fun because we had free time all day. The production was called tiddler and we had to stay inside the class. We had to get our face painted and we had to put on our costumes when it was our turn our class was doing the cup song but in our own lyrics our one started at 11:00 in the middle block we had our morning tea early at 9:50 we had to sing loud in front of our audience and then we done the same production again,same time at night (11:00) and after the production we had to take our costumes off and had to go home.

the rena

 

HAVE A TITLE WITH A GOOD HOOK.

I THINK A GOOD BLOG SHOULD HAVE THE FOLLOWING CRITERIA.

HAVE AN INTERESTING HOOK AND INTERESTING QUESTION.

USE BIG INTERESTING WORDS.

THE BLOG SHOULD BE WRITTEN IN 1ST PERSON.

THE STYLE OF WRITING SHOULD BE INFLUENCE FRIENDLY.

I THINK A GOOD BLOG SHOULD HAVE A GOOD TITLE THE TITLE

NEEDS TO TELL THE READER EXACTLY WHAT THE SUBJECT IS GOING TO BE ABOUT AND GETS THE READER'S ATTENTION.

TRY TO AVOID NEGATIVITY AND STAY POSITIVE.`